same same
waves, the like,
like, and like,
same same
attachment to,
and to, and,
same same photographic present
memory like water, and like wind
seasons, sunsets, serpent skins
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Brittany...
- Brittany Elizabeth Barnes
- ...grew up in San Diego, California and attended the University of Arizona. She lives in Seattle, Washington, where she continues to explore poetry and creative writing with the hope of further developing her craft. Poetreatise is the virtual venue for her newest work.
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"presen(t/ce)" gets odd, cumbersome, sort of. the last paragraph puzzled me at first but made up in the last two lines. wonderful to read as always.
ReplyDeletei REALLY like the serpent skins image.
cumbersome, yeah. What did I learn from this poem? When you can't decide between things to say, saying both at once is not the answer :) Thanks for reading/commenting!
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